• leeanne

    This is a very poorly written article that wouldn’t pass muster in a 10th grade English class.   What about Sir Richard Branson?   You need supporting evidence for this topic sentence.     Overall, you’ve provided generalizations and no details on the topic of multiple streams of income, then you ask the reader to fill in the gaps with information you should have researched and provided.

  • http://pristineperception.com/ Suzanne

    “Don’t start everything all at once” That was my problem. Then the domino effect occurred.  Frustration, confusion and exhaustion. This is a very important yet overlooked point.

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    Thanks Leeanne for your feedback. Sometimes, I write articles that provides the reader with a space to think and reflect. That’s why I invited the readers to continue the discussion in the comments section. For example, those who don’t know Sir Richard Branson might Google the name and learn more about him. I believe this way increases reader engagement and also improves the learning experience. 

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    This indeed is an overlooked point. That’s why we should learn how to manage our enthusiasm. 

  • Kathy N

    I’ll remember this, “Don’t start everything at once.”

    http://daily-iphoneography.posterous.com/

  • stephyrulz

    I like this idea of making money through various avenues – it’s good for those who can’t fully commit to one thing because there are so many opportunities and niches in the world. I do agree you could have expanded a bit more, though.

    Stephanie
    http://www.theglamguide.com

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    That’s an excellent take away!

  • http://blog.self-improvement-saga.com/ Coach Nea

    I think a lot of people fall into the category of having a passion mix. I definitely agree that focusing on one passion and building that business first is more effective than attempting to do everything all at once. 

  • Jamie

    something that i would have found useful is maybe a hyperlink on his name to an article that relates him and your topic.  i liked the article overall and i think that its good to surf the web when presented with an unfamiliar name.  for srb, you could have linked his name to the Day in the Life episode on Hulu that features him, Virgin, and his charitable outreach

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    That’s a very good idea. Thanks for your constructive feedback.

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    It is now very easy to test different niches and see which one grows faster and easier. Starting a few blogs and see which one resonates more with you and your market could be a good strategy,

  • http://www.transformationalmotivation.com/ M. Tohami

    Focus is key. You can’t move on to your next big idea before you’ve built enough momentum for the first.